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I'm caught in a web
I'm tangled in tight
My eyes are looking
But I've lost all sight
I try calling out
But my voice doesn't sound
My ears twitch and hear
The only sound near
Is that sadistic laughter
Echoing in my ear
Over and over
Faster and faster
He's coming closer
Something is torn
And it starts to burn
What will you do
When it's your turn?
- by maydaymouse |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/26/2009 |
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- Title: Blind Web
- Artist: maydaymouse
- Description: Ok, I've just had a spew of creativity overthe past few days, and I hope you like what I've spewed!^^ But I don't think it's one of my best owrks, but judge for yourselves and comment and rate fairly.
- Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: blind
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Comments (5 Comments)
- niNja_sockiiZ - 06/21/2010
- GASP. IT'S....IT'S...AAAAAAAAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG. :>
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- magic_doglover - 06/19/2010
- very nice and creepy. good consistency, too. 5/5
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- peacekitten65 - 07/14/2009
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Outta all the poems of yours I've read, I have to say that this one is the best by far!
The short lines and one stanza thing really works for you.
That's different than alotta poets, but you do great with it! - Report As Spam
- Lilith Celestine17 - 07/02/2009
- This is amazing, I really enjoyed reading it.
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- BatzLove - 06/26/2009
- cool. thats really good.
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