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I see your hand
I see your heart
There is an end
There is a start
In this world
Where we should be
Plus you and
Minus me
There is no love
Only loneliness
With the minus
And the plus
The you
And the me
We are together
That is what I see
Without the minus
And with the plus
Now we see
Where it works
The plus of you
And the plus of me
Two birds flying free
Is what I see
When I hear these
Words to my ears:
The plus of you
And the plus of me
There is love
Without loneliness
When two birds
Go and fly free
With the plus you
And the plus of me
- Title: Plus and Minus
- Artist: Mergoat
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Description:
I have this posted on deviantart.com and livejournal.com
I just randomly thought this up one morning, the first part stuck in my head until it hurt, so i had no choice but to write it down and eventually post it, considering i left my L.A. teacher who is a literature perfectionist could not find one damn thing wrong with it^^ - Date: 06/26/2009
- Tags: plus minus love random thoughts
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- Sapphire_Honuka_73 - 06/26/2009
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bit confusing but i think it's becuz i'm a blonde
but other than that it was great i really enjoyed it - Report As Spam
- Shameful Metaphore - 06/26/2009
- A very great point you got in the making of this song; the fact that if you look for the good qualities in a person you can be free, other than people who focus on difference. am I right?
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