Torn Apart

• Artist: Grettikka
• Description: This is another one of my poems that I wrote my ninth grade year, yea, a lot happened that year....Leave a comment if you like it, and also if you don't, it's kool. Thanks for reading!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
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• Date: 06/22/2009
• Tags: torn apart

When you held me
I never wanted you to let me go

When we kissed goodbye
I wished we were kissing hello

When I go home
I wish I were coming home to you

When you leave
I already miss you

We were in love
But it's like we've been torn apart

Don't worry
Cuz you'll always be in my heart.

heart

Comments

[GothChick_MCR]

i really have nothing to say except its really good

[Douce Lumiere]

Awwww... Perfect, except for the "cuz". Just say because. It'll make it sound a lot more sincere.