LOVE AND DIGRACE

• Artist: XxEl-Nino-latinoXx
• Description: I JUST WROTE ABOUT IDK
  
• Date: 06/21/2009
• Tags: 3mos

YOU SEE ME COMING YOUR WAY
BUT YOU DO NOT WANT TO BE
SEEN WITH ME.
I AM A DISGRACE YOU SAY
BUT WHY
YOU KEEP CALLING ME BACK

I CANNOT LET THIS GO ON
I MUST OUT AN
END TO IT YOU SAY YOU LOVE ME
SO SHOW ME THAT LOVE

YOU HAVE HURTEN ME BEFORE
BUT THIS TIME IT WILL BE DIFFERENT
BECAUSE I HAVE NO HURT LEFT
FOR YOU TO BREAK

Comments

[cinderheIIa]

I actually like this. Just keep writing and reading poetry to fix your grammar, punctuation, and format. A poem doesn't need rhyme or meter, but you need some sort of formula to make it work. Using this emotion with correct format could make some great poetry. Keep writing!

[Wicked Monstrosity]

Nuuuuh! There is nothing I hate more than caps. D:<
I didn't even read the poem, I dislike them that much.
Skipped.

[Klaora]

I'm not even sure how you can call this a poem. There's no meter or rhyme. There's nothing that provokes any thought or interpretation, nothing more than confusion with lack of punctuation, incorrect spellings, horrid grammar, and abuse of the capital letters.
Please please please....at least TRY to do better.