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First Stanza:
You talk too much,
So hold your breath.
Or else you will stand,
On the brink of death.
It’s jerking, lurking,
Waiting for you.
Waiting to strike,
So it can pull you through.
That big black hole,
Where nobody knows.
Nobody cares,
But everyone goes.
But now it’s time to
Take a stand.
Give me your hand,
And let’s reprimand. (whispered)
Chorus:
So whoa oh oh oh
You can’t
Tell me that you
Don’t believe in love.
No oh, you can’t
Ever
Say what
You’ve been dreaming of.
Whoa oh oh oh
We shall
Hold on tight
And jump, up above.
So oh oh oh
Don’t tell me
You don’t
Believe in love.
- Title: Don't Believe In Love
- Artist: MelTur
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Description:
This is the first song I have written so far, so I hope you like it. It's about love and risk. I don't think it's quite finished yet, but i wanted to know everyone's opinion before i fixed it.
So I hope you enjoy it. Please tell me what you think - Date: 06/12/2009
- Tags: dont believe love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Yuffie Kisa - 06/14/2009
- You should post it when it's finished, it's nice. smile
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- scitama - 06/13/2009
- I like it!! Things just clicked in the way you worded stuff smile Personally, I'd like to see it longer b/c I liked it smile
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