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It's so cold where I'm standing
wind blows my hair
from my house roof I'm looking
I think I'm gonna dare
this sudden fear I'm feeling
when thunder make a blare
this killing cold I'm freezing
oh this is just not fair...
I can not hold my tears
I think I'll cry till eternity
I can not stop these fears
I'm freaking out I can not bear..
My eyes can no longer hide
still nobody's on my side
no! I can no longer fight
these feelings on this night..
I'm so numb I can not move
I'm looking down
my hand that's on my heart does prove
that I'm breaking down
It's so dark no stars in the sky
It starts to rain
I wish I could spread my wings and fly
instead I feel the pain
oh It's getting too much
I hate this life
I wanna finish this off
so I hold this knife
This pain I'm feeling.. you can not see.. you can not hear.. you do not care
This life I'm living.. I can not bear.. I can not feel.. nor I can share
I'm so alone.. on a one way path
No turning back! No turning back!
I can not fake it
It's just too much
I need to show it
but it hurts so much
I'm shivering
I think I'll let go
I'll close my eyes
I'll loose I know
but I never won
so I think It's the same
I'll fall It's easy
there's no one to blame
goodbye I'm leaving.. so blind, can't see
this world has turned It's back on me...
- by Sandra Jamal |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/07/2009 |
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Arkythiana - 07/14/2009
- Good work! I liked the feelings your rhyming evoked. I can tell the character is desperate, but I also like how there's some obscurity as to the cause of her pain. I like how there's feeling, but it leaves mystery and doesn't give too much away.
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