She Had The World

• Artist: Panic Pirate
• Description: It could mean anything you want it to mean :) IT IS NOT ABOUT the Panic at the disco song as the title may suggest
  
  Experimenting with writing 3 verses or less poems- how's it working for you?
• Date: 06/05/2009
• Tags: world love rejection carnival

Hand in hand with a faceless future
We scattered dreams like seeds
Hoping one day to dance right through
A golden field of memories

Not drowning, just waving; just a reflection
These eyes were carved to see the world for you
Come with me into the Hall of Mirrors
And try to see what’s on the other side

Close enough to kiss; you pull away
Leave me waiting, wanting more
Let the monsoon rains gently close my eyes and whisper:
“Make a wish”

Comments

[Panic Pirate]

Thank you, but how can you not like a topic that doesn't exist? This poem is completely open to interpretation; it HAS no solid topic.
Thanks for the comments anyway you two smile

[- Lilli nera --]

i don like that topic. but a very beautiful poem 4/5

[x-Asthenia-x]

I can totally visualise the world of Pretty. Odd. reading this smile
it's very pretty and makes you say "Aww!" beautifull!