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Your tears slip by unnoticed by most of your friends
but i have noticed and it hurts me to see
you suffer like this.
Please,I beg this isn't how it ends.
I watch as droplet by droplet falls off your hand
and hit the floor
as you whisper,
"I wish I was no more."
My eyes fill to the brim with rain
because you think this is your only way
to stay sane.
I try to tell you that it's not the only way
but you won't listen to me...
so I cry for you
because I know there's nothing left that anyone can say.
She won't listen,
not to me,not to Travis...no one.
She just cries alone and screams inside,
watching her blood glisten.
What more can I do
to help you ?
I see inside,
the girl fighting with her might who wants help,
but you keep her down with a razor's kiss on your wrist.
I failed to help you...
and I'm sorry for that...
I tried...
but in the end tring won't be enough.
I just miss the girl who used to laugh.
- by sexy-RAWRZ-ya |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/04/2009 |
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- Title: My poor friend Aimee
- Artist: sexy-RAWRZ-ya
- Description: it's a poem about my friend who I worry about even though she doesn't know that I know she still cuts herself whenever she gets the chance.plz comment and rate I would really like to know how good or bad you think it is and how I could improve
- Date: 06/04/2009
- Tags: poor friend aimee
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Xxwhiskey in the jarxX - 06/28/2009
- seriously i love it.even if you left gaia i still love it.
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- Erectrician - 06/14/2009
- In the beginning it reminded me of myself, and how i act.now I know how my loved ones feel. Thank you so much for writing this.
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- sexy-RAWRZ-ya - 06/07/2009
- thank u for commenting and yes i understand this...but honestly i don't see how this is helping her in any other way than a small outlet for a few seconds until reality kicks in...and before anyone asks yes i am trying to be polite and rreply to everyone's comment...i feel rude otherwise.
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- A Krysis - 06/06/2009
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I can relate to this and so can my friends...
I used to...okay still do cut myself and my friends do everything they can but tell adults...
They are worried but when you don't think you have a meaning sometimes this helps - Report As Spam
- sexy-RAWRZ-ya - 06/04/2009
- thank u for the comment and for the best wishes...i'm glad u liked my poem as well
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