set it free

• Artist: XxXkylee-nightrunnerXxX
• Description: a poem written when listening to the classical music
• Date: 05/30/2009
• Tags: free

a regretfull wish
a horrid dream come true
waiting
on the one
who can
take this soul
and set it free
fix this pair
of broken wings
so maybe one day
this little broken girl
my fly
and be beautiful once more

Comments

[DoubleMintTwins18]

Its ok..3/5 There is no rhythum..you need to keep a steady beat. Good job anyway. Better than most ive seen.