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A dark angel fallen from the light
One who is never in the right
All happiness and joy
Taken and destroyed
All I can have is pain and sorrow
I wanna take my life to end all this strife
But you made me promise you
To never end my life to be here in this life
Damn my honor and my word
But only for you
This promise I will keep
Though it hurts to be so misunderstood
I rather take my blade and break open a vein
You took them all away
My sorrow it grows
The more that I know
I failed to protect you from the world....
I want to cry
I want to die
But I can never do any of those
I have to stay strong
To help you find joy
To bring you happiness
Though it hurts so much......
These old memories of us.....
Oh how we used to be....
And what broke up apart....
Why does god take all that I love and rip it from my heart....
- Title: A Dark Angel's Wish
- Artist: hadezs7
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Description:
A poem I made feeling realy down and since almost everyone I know thinks im evil in some way I might as well make one
Please dont poast anything if you dont have anything nice to say. Critism is how ever welcomed to help make better poems. - Date: 05/29/2009
- Tags: dark angels wish
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Comments (5 Comments)
- the_ashen_child - 07/07/2009
- i highly dought you're "evil" *rolls eyes* like the poem (i'ld give you advice, but i really suck at it XD)
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- Maybe Matches - 06/02/2009
- You might want to work on the rhythm of the poem. Also, try making your rhyming schemes more consistent. You went from aabb to abab and back a few times.
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- HurtRebelChick - 05/31/2009
- I really like it. I totally understand how that feels
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- Sir Loopy - 05/30/2009
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Idk wat to say
Such sorrow I do not know
I truly hope one day u find the happiness u deserve - Report As Spam
- hadezs7 - 05/30/2009
- commments please?
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