Black Rain

• Artist: dragonlover5
• Description: I felt so horrible in the inside. In order to release it, i write my emotions down and turn them into things such as this. I am not like this all the time, but I am most of the time. I felt like I could never get out of my pain. People dont push me down, I push myself way down.
• Date: 05/17/2009
• Tags: hear

Sperits hear my cry
Blackness falls from the sky
All the trees start to die

Everyone seems to lie to me
Everyone seems to hide
Because of me

What good
Comes from this
When I'm falling
Into a black abyess

I sware I'm going insane
I sware there's too much pain
I sware I see my black rain

Sperits hear my cry
Blackness falls from the sky
All the trees start to die
I have arrived

Crawling through
Nothing else i can do
I wont let you hold me down

What good
Comes from this
When I'm falling
Into a black abyess
Nothing else to see
No one to be
I wont let you hold me down

Blackness is everywhere
This I sware

Comments

[Silently_Die_By_You]

this is prettygood. it needs a bit more structure, but overall very good

[AccountHackedNowClosed]

wow...

[Black Ravenz]

It Seems To Reflect What I Feel Always.You Seem To Relate To Me. Love It Your Really Talented.