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Once upon a time, isn't that how it starts?
Getting closer, and closer;
finally touching each others parts.
A relationship to see whose a better actor.
You're telling everyone that I want you,
But I know you know that's not true.
I haven't for a while.
Do you feel like a *****?
Saying I'm too young thinking you're to great,
You're making yourself the person I hate.
I don't think I need you anymore,
Why do I still feel like a whore?
Don't stop, yeah that's what I said.
Because you make me h*rny in my head.
I bet you know who you are,
Do you think you've gone to far?
Now you make me need you,
I shouldn't have crossed this line,
Hold me close, and kiss me,
But I wont call you mine.
I want to grant you all your needs,
Get close, and bite the hand that feeds
Then chew it, break it, until it bleeds.
I think I may have loved you,
Is it possible you loved me too?
In the end, what is the truth?
In my current age of youth
All I taste is your poison,
I'm just the one
Who gave you some action.
'Get on your knees' I'm your b*tch
That was long ago, and we've switched.
Now you'll do anything for me little kitty
Now, do you still think that I'm pretty?
Is it true, you say you're scared?
Good, cause hon, in the end I'm prepared.
Chains and whips, not for s*x
Oh, just wait for the after effects.
Do you still love me now that I'm old?
Have you honestly forgotten
That you left me in the cold?
- by Pleasure moon |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/17/2009 |
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- Title: Whose better now?
- Artist: Pleasure moon
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Description:
*sigh* well, I'm not sure I truly like it. Please tell me what you think D= I really want to fix it and make it perfect. I realize it does swear a bit, I think its a necessity. If you don't like it swearing, don't get pissy about it.
Tell me what I can do to make it better/what you think it's about/ect.., Thanks. - Date: 05/17/2009
- Tags: whose better
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Comments (2 Comments)
- kimpaiii - 05/18/2009
- it's really good! would you comment on my work too? biggrin
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- Crulii3 - 05/18/2009
- wow...nice.
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