Hopeless

• Artist: devilchild777
• Description: .
• Date: 05/16/2009
• Tags: hopeless

I conceal the hurt,
Keep it all inside.
Murder lives,
Inside my mind.

One last trip,
One last fall.
Pretty soon,
I'll lose it all.

The pain overcomes,
The happiness,
The past loves.

I can't make it alright,
All I can do is
keep up the fight.
But I can do it no longer.

As I go down,
The dark approaches.
It gets worse,
As the hurt coaches.

It coaches me,
Into a deep sleep.
I'm going down,
I'm slipping away.

Then I realize,
As I look up.
This cut won't heal.
I won't wake up.

Comments

[devilchild777]

Thanks for all your comments.
Yes, I really wrote it.
smile

[kilobite]

I'm not going to try to get you, because I'm guessing you wrote this because nobody gets you. I will say, however, I do feel like that sometimes. 5/5

[Rygaen Yuui]

You make despair sound delicious.

Well done.

[mikey-kudo]

wow is tha really yours?

[Abdog X]

Very good!Seems to be my feelings right now.

[MusicalMisfit]

OH MY GOSH! I've had this wanting to cry feeeling in me all day and that just set it off. that was great!