Eventually

• Artist: Prophet Kross
• Description:
• Date: 04/30/2009
• Tags: eventually

I've lost my brothers, ive lost my Friends,
But its not the end, cuz we will enventually see each other again,
We are connected by the bond that unbreakable, cuz im to fond of the joy
To let go, ill take it to the grave and beyond,
Im the cross, that keeps everyone from getting lost & confused, when everything seems false and u get infused, with hate, thats changes fate,
Because you never know what will happen until its too late,
The wieght is too great, you might break under the heat and pressure,
you'll bt defeated but everything will get better from there out, but it wont be the only scare, if you keep livin without a care, your weak, you will easily Tear

Comments

[Killa-Keyblade Master-]

Spelling my friend, please brush up on the spelling. Your personal style is reflected in here, which I love. You did good, there is a lot of greatness in this. Overall, separate pauses, like at "Because you never know what will happen...etc." I felt that there should've been a break before the "because". My eyes had to jump back to make sure I was reading it right, 4/5.

[the_ashen_child]

hmmmmm, its nice like always XD *applauds*