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I never walked on wat i saw,
the reason to be going out tht far.
I never found a start to make a wish,
but now the sky is listenin to my heart.
Tht can break me,
make me, if they wont they can chase me.
Love me,
hate me,
i dont care anymore.
Till you!
There was notin but lonely nights,
notin but sacrifice,
for me to fall through.
Come true,
my dreams are awakening.
Somebody is makin me,
the oly one tht can do,
nobody can do,
nobody till you!
The more you talk the less i fear,
no matter wat you say were still on the same hemisphere.
Its comfortin just knowin tht,
where ever i go a part of me is stayin here,
with you.
So take me,
shake me.
If you want you can chase me,
love me,
hate me,
just stay away from the door.
Till you!
There was notin but lonely nights,
notin but sacrifice,
for me to fall through.
Come true,
my dreams are awakening!
Somebody is making me,onely one tht can do,
nobody can do,
nobody till you!
What knid of world would it be,
if you ever went away?!!
Oh! ans i cant go back to wat i had cuz,
it will never be the same!!
Till you....
There was notin but lonely nights,
notin but sacrifice,
for me to fall through....
- by Xx-Moonlight97-xX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/18/2009 |
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- Title: dumb song 6
- Artist: Xx-Moonlight97-xX
- Description: another song i wrote...idc wat score you will give me...idc at all anymore
- Date: 04/18/2009
- Tags: dumb song
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Xx-Moonlight97-xX - 04/26/2009
- ok pplz!!! i kno this has horrible spelling errors ok!! i dont need everyone telling me so! (srry bout seemin bitchy)
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- emzerena - 04/26/2009
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Also good, but once again with the spelling.
If you ever want someone to edit your work, feel free to get in touch with me=) - Report As Spam
- Xx-Moonlight97-xX - 04/21/2009
- yeah i kno...i was in a hurry and i got a couple stuff spelt wrong...oh well i horrible speller anyway. thanks 4 the comments any way smile
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- -x- Fridge -x- - 04/21/2009
- I agree. Great song, but horrible spelling. If you'd like, I can beta it for you and then PM it to you, so you can put up the correctly spelled version.
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- Rawr_x_Skittlez - 04/20/2009
- terrible spelling but i cant judge cuz im not much better but the song is great
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