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If my feelings were a word,
it does not exist here.
If my heart had a beat,
it wouldn't be too clear.
If my breath suddenly stops,
it isn't something bad.
Because emotions I have for you,
are the best I've ever had.
I can't help that I swoon,
or clutch you close to me.
Here is where I want to stay,
beside you endlessly.
If your touch carried a name,
I wouldn't know how to say...
I couldn't give a word for how
you make me feel this way.
I'm trying to write this poem,
I'm weaving words in drama.
I can't think, I can't rhyme now..
With such a word like 'drama.'
I cannot write this poem,
so now I'll tear it up.
I can't tell you in human words,
how you've lifted me up.
My dearest TJ, I do implore...
That you will give me one chance more...
To set the record straight,
To tell you as my heart does soar...
...That I do not, can not love you,
for it is of this world.
And my feeling reaches deeper than that,
my feeling is something more...
Screw these words! Screw the rhyme!
Stay with me, and be mine!
I would cross the ocean,
I would beat the sand.
I would do most anything,
if you will be my man.
I guess.. What I'm trying to say is...
Timothy James, will you marry me?
- by Kechero-TheForsakenRose |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/17/2009 |
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- Title: Marry me?
- Artist: Kechero-TheForsakenRose
- Description: I've been dating TJ for a long time. I love him... And I wanted to write him another poem, like my enjoyed 'there's no poem' submission... But I can't. Now here, in front of everyone on gaia, I want to ask him the deepest question of my heart... Wish me luck?
- Date: 04/17/2009
- Tags: marry
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Lady Knight Faelynn - 05/08/2011
- Aww this is very sweet. Loved everything about it. Good luck to you both! smile
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- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 08/04/2009
- aawwww thats so sweet! you're a very good poet. have any tips for me? plz rate/comment mine?
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- TinyVikings - 04/17/2009
- Awe! I was just married, so I know how you feel! I hope you both have a long and healthy life!
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- Mileena Chardonnay - 04/17/2009
- YES!!! *KISSES HER PASSIONATELY IN FRONT OF ALL THE GAIANS!!!*
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- AnimaRisi - 04/17/2009
- GOOD LUCK!!!!
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