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Melancholy is very sweet
Alone to self
Others don't matter
Happy is sad
No need for affection
Cold is motherly touch
Shivers thorought body
Sensation feels grand
At times uncontrolable
Coolness is death's miracle
Is happiness really needed
Sadness helps focus
All is clear
Hatred deep within
Reality is truly seen
Deep within the abyss
Some will flee
Others will misinterpret
Few feel acceptance
Depends on your views
Love is another emotion
One that hinders
Burden life unnecessarly
Lonliness is comfort
Why seek a word
Hard life sadly is
Embrace this fact
Strengthens only you
Distance is relevant
No need to run
Majority speak of happiness
They lie absently
Some may know
Happiness is fantasy
Nothing is truly happy
Knowledge is tasteful fruit
Knowledge only helps
Negative or positive
Be open minded
Knowledge is one mission
Philosophy I only speak
Light maybe seen
Only favorites accepted
Darkness welcomes all
Do you follow darkness
Till death rids us
Of our pain
Of our sorrow
Of our fragileness
Only Obilvion awaits us
- by kuroshimodo-original |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/16/2009 |
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- Title: Darkness
- Artist: kuroshimodo-original
- Description: A poem I made about my meaning of darkness. The poem format is a style I made up. You can comment if you like. . . also my other works are free to be commented. . . so you know.
- Date: 04/16/2009
- Tags: loneliness
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Comments (7 Comments)
- kuroshimodo-original - 04/16/2009
- I appreciate your comment sincerly. If you like my poem style, check out my poems "Here. . . right here" and "Shadow". These two poems have a similiar theme as this one. I sound like I am begging, huh? lol. Ok maybe a little bit.
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- SexiiBubblegum94 - 04/16/2009
- this is really good.
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- kuroshimodo-original - 04/16/2009
- Why another lovely comment. I just can't get enough.
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- NebuChi3 - 04/16/2009
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You spelled some things wrong in there.
But all-in-all, it was extremely well organized && said.
I just don't like to think of negative things anymore, but they appear no matter what I do. - Report As Spam
- kuroshimodo-original - 04/16/2009
- Thank you for your most appreciated comment.
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- citygurl__63-wisteria- - 04/16/2009
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good i actually really like it
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