Moon B*tch

• Artist: Goddess_nataku
• Description: I'm not sure if I'll get in trouble or not, but this is the feelings of Tory to Acheron. I made this the very first day I learned that Acheron would finally find someone that he would love. You should read the series. the author is Sherrilyn Kenyon.
• Date: 04/16/2009
• Tags: moon btch

You piss me off Artemis

With your bitchy-attitude,

And full-of-s**t power

And the obedience of Acheron

Using him as your own personal slave.

The only thing you have over him,

Is a goddamn necklace around your neck.

You took his soul b***h,

Used him for your sick pleasure.

Made him fight your battles,

And scarred his back,

With your whip at night,

For hours….

Every time I see him,

Heal his back from the scars.

My hate for you grows,

Seen you dead, is what I want most.

So hear me when I say this, Moon b***h

Let me make it loud and clear.

You may have his soul,

But his heart belongs to me.

Comments

[Agorphia]

I like the last two lines, but the rest of it might as well be a paragraph. It doesn't flow like a poem. It just sounds like prose. 3/5