Please

• Artist: akatsukigrlX
• Description:
  this is a poem about change. because i used to rely on others for everything and could never do anything on my own. now, i think i am stronger. i want to help those who helped me and be the crutch for them to lean on. i want to know that i meant as much to someone else as they have meant to me.
  this poem is about change. and for once, it is optimistic, or at least happy. i know it isnt good because i speant next to no time on it, but i still hope you like it.
  
• Date: 04/13/2009
• Tags: please

Please:
Hold my hand while we cross the street
Because I am young and blind;
I need protection...
And I finally trust you as my guide

Please:
Lend me your smile when we are locked in the dark
Because my own is broken;
I need a flashlight…
And you shine brighter than any bulb

Please:
Cry into my shoulder if the music stops
Because I can finally play you a joyful song;
I need to hear your laugh again…
And I know that this time it will chime in tune

Please:
Know that always I will wait with a bandage
Because sometimes even angels break down;
I need your wings to work perfectly once more…
And I will fly with you away into heaven

Comments

[serasvictoria147]

nice useage of repition[[sry cant spell it]]
4/5

[A_Kazuhiko]

I liked the second part the rest was blah blah blah