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I never believe in love at first sight
Until i saw the girl in the light.
We first saw eye to eye
We couldn't really say good bye.
My first words were "Will you go out with me?"
Her answer was yes, but in Spanish it's "Sí"
My heart beat faster my face turned red.
My mouth was closed with nothing to be said.
The girl i meet was the light
Now i believe in love at first sight.
- by General Terrastorm |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Title: Love at first sight
- Artist: General Terrastorm
- Description: Just a poem I had in my head and i felt like sharing. This poem is about me and my girlfriend Jesse and how i felt when we first met. got a prob. dont even read it.
- Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: love first sight
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Comments (4 Comments)
- CaffinatedBiroPen - 04/09/2010
- I think you need to check your grammar here and there but otherwise it's good. A bit too much unneaded rhyme too. 3/5
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- iloveblanketyblank - 04/12/2009
- Your girlfriend would love this! If you haven't already, share this with her! I'm sure she'd be very flattered smile I know I would be!
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- Art of Thievery - 04/10/2009
- sniff sniff it`sso beautiful
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- Jesse-Xcore_RawrRiot - 04/10/2009
- AWWW this is too cute!! <333
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