Porcelain

• Artist: Evilmonkies1
• Description: something's break
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: porcelain break

As the moon glistens off the mirror like lake
i wonder if our love was fake
Cause it was i who took the time to spare
And it t'was i who thought we were fair
But you never really cared
And as you sit there wondering why i stand to say goodbye.

Comments

[Kaiuc00]

it's nice but it needs a stronger ending yours is more of a cliffhanger kinda thing