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Sakura. Cherry blossoms
My means of destruction, of beauty
To overthrow, to undertake
A plan, so perfect yet so fragile
That one must know who to trust
Hinote. Flame
His obedience, his deception
Contaminated my dreams, if real,
To lead, not to follow
A path to one’s hearts
To be whole, to be complete
To be what you are
Omoide. Memories
The chains that interlock in your heart
To protect, to recognize
But you, unaware of your well-being,
Can take the lies to satisfy the truth
And not wonder otherwise
Because you know no better
Keppaku. Innocence
With eyes of sapphire, of power
To introduce counterfeit, so real,
That one no longer questions legitimacy
And with unsteady morals
Like a compass, with a simple turn,
Can change the direction it points to
Yet still can not be blames
Fukusei. replica
Imitator from such power of darkness
And servant of it’s memories that one can’t take
The confusion. Is it an illusion or a trick?
To protect her and destroy whom ever comes near
To rely on the darkness the original strives to rid itself of
Imation, interference, indeed
Sakura. Cherry blossoms
My downfall, my destroyant
to output such power. My angel, my Scythe
And have one of broken memories in need or re-chaining
Give me my final hour… my final battle
The potential puppet over ceded the master.
Insolent fool
- by marluxiasflower |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/02/2009 |
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- Title: Sakura. Cherry Blossom
- Artist: marluxiasflower
- Description: this is a poem i was gonna take to ACEN this year, but i might not be going anymroe, but i still love it. i'm not sure the translations are correct, but close enough, right? i still love it. it's about Marluxia and his effort to control Sora, who is the "you" in the poem
- Date: 04/02/2009
- Tags: sakura cherry blossom marluxia kingdomhearts
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Comments (6 Comments)
- iiLoKii - 12/21/2009
- I think your attempting to make it sound good by making it abstract and in no way relating to the title -___- people are turning poetry into something thats supposed to be, "sophisticated" how much do you see people actually rhyming and making a poem interesting to read these days? I couldn't even get through the first stanza; no rhythm, no rhyming to keep the reader reading and interested. 0/5
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- dottypurrs-sis - 04/18/2009
- i love it! =D 5/5 and good luck! ^^
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- HamburgerHero1776 - 04/15/2009
- I really liked this! I see it as Marluxia's attitude and perception of the events of Chain of Memories, and it really fits! Nice job!
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- Sunafire - 04/07/2009
- I like this too smile Its a really nice poem, with nice contrasts and nice freestyle. Try and fix all the tiny little typos and it'll be perfect biggrin
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- DeerestHammy - 04/06/2009
- That's a freakin piece of work. Way to go PROFESSIONAL!!!You're an amazing poet.
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- Nurse Katherine - 04/02/2009
- i really liked this piece of writting.
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