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dont say you love me
cuz it really hurts inside
i cant believe my eyes
cuz when ya leave me i just cry
i not able to see ya
im just able to cry
ill keep my head up
but ill really be crying inside
im miss ya so much
and yet you still said i love u
and when i said it you just said goodbye
now im asking myself why
why i said it back
why you said it first
but ill keep my head up
just for everyone else
when i miss ya
i just tell myself inside dont be upset
its just part of life
i loved you so much
but now that you said goodbye
i cant get over the fact
that you said you love me
but ya really didnt
it was all just part of a dare
but ill keep my head in the air
keep my chin up
and enjoy my life
- by SwimFAN9975 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/29/2009 |
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- Title: Don't Say "I Love You"
- Artist: SwimFAN9975
- Description: This poem I made up is bc i just got broken up with he said he loved me but he did not. It took me about a month to get over him!!
- Date: 03/29/2009
- Tags: broken hearted
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Nurse Katherine - 04/03/2009
- i soo knoy this what you mean by this:
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- cooll666725 - 04/01/2009
- Work on grammar, spelling, and making the rhythm consistent. Overall the writing is very good though. ^_^ I'll give it a 4/5. Read my poems if you'd like sometime.
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- Kurly1126 - 03/30/2009
- Really good but could have been better
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- Faceti0us - 03/29/2009
- Work on your grammar and spelling.
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