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Hidden
No one truly understands
the pain another feels...
The nights they've cried
The feeling they can't put aside
They think no one cares
and to them it's just too much to bare.
You take one look and all you see
is some person whose happiness is seen
Not thinking about the pain they might feel
or the tears they tries to conceal
Not really looking but seeing
You hear them laugh
but not the sound of hallow they make
You see them smile
but not the emptiness it brings
There smiling on the outside
crying on the inside
Laughing out loud
Dying deep down
and no one knows but themselves...
By: Selina//Kissess
- by Petal_Chick1 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/27/2009 |
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- Title: Hidden
- Artist: Petal_Chick1
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Description:
Here's a poem I made by myself. After I read this poem I realized to others it might sound like I got this out of a book or something ,well sorry to say, it isn't but feel free to think anything you want. I wrote this poem because lately I've been feeling really down and I just felt like expressing my feelings somehow so, here it is. My real feelings.
~Please comment! - Date: 03/27/2009
- Tags: hidden emotions feelings
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Comments (7 Comments)
- luve_linkin_park - 04/03/2009
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its amazing
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- dirtbikedude1226 - 04/02/2009
- wow thats deep..... i suck with writing poems.
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- YeeB123 - 04/01/2009
- nice. i cant write nearly that good. I usually dont even come up with 1
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- silentprinceofrage - 03/29/2009
- It's a great poem!!
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- Izy - Lawliet - 03/29/2009
- i love this poem! smile its true and exactly wat i think!!!! plz write more biggrin
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- SherbetHolmes - 03/28/2009
- wow its great! 5!
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- Anju_Shoma95 - 03/28/2009
- thats awesome can u vote for my avi?
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