Revenge

• Artist: DeerestHammy
• Description: This is a poem I wrote for an English assignment in the 8th grade.
• Date: 03/21/2009
• Tags: revenge

I hold this blade in my hands
In hopes that you can see,
All the hopes, all the dreams
that you crushed in me.

I hold this blade up to your throat
in hopes that you can feel,
All the bruises, all the cuts
All the times you've screamed
and made my head reel.

I slide this blade down your neck
In hopes that you will die,
For all the times you've hurt me,
my friends, for all the times
You've made me
Cry.

Comments

[Dynobot Slam]

wow....sounds like something i wrote in the 7th for my teacher....

[Caesura Caelum]

I can almost see the way the teacher reacted from this XD -cough- but no seriously this was great

[story_liver]

I like it. At first I was a little scared that it would be about cutting(not that I have anything against it)...but it was pleasantly not...