sorrow

• Artist: Queen_Plum
• Description: the 2nd poemin my emotion series please read the first one called lonley tell me what you think and if its not to much of a bother please take a quick glance at my other poems i enjoy your feed back on them
• Date: 03/08/2009
• Tags: sorrow

Grand there sadness seems
See it gleam behind shattered eyes
Battered hearts taking more blows
As if the feeling shall never die
Peeling apart foundations of the mind
Slashing away as if it wore blind
Bashing away at their worn insides
Born threw lies
Dies when they’re kind
But still some remains
Hidden in the faint pain
Forgotten but not slain
Plain fear keeps it alive
It waits to hear your screams
Lurking within those freighting dreams
It’s a biting dog at your feat
A song with a bad beat
The person watching you with fleeting eyes
That friend that left with no good bye
What a feeling
What a wonder
What could this emotion be?
One answer
One horror
Long live the one named sorrow

Comments

[The Pond]

It's nice.. but you should run it through a spell check..

[Cloffing Pempslider]

"Grand there sadness seems"? Is this translated from Chinese or something?
It sucks.

[Queen_Plum]

i dont mind if peopel print this out as long as they dont tell peopel they wrote it

[Popashi]

Your poem is so butifull and so very true. I think i'll print this too, if you don't mind.

[darkness rising X]

that was so true.....the poem describes it very well.....hey unforgotten pains can I print this off....because it is awsome...