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Audrey
Funny
little
Face.
Her doe brown eyes
and
bat-wing brows
brushed
up
to meet mouse-chewed
hair.
A Fair Lady
with
cultured
voice
(like pearls)
and
graceful
elegance.
While
white-and-black-flickers
paint your
face
on
sheets
and garage doors,
taking
w i d e e y e s
on Roman
Holidays
and
Love-warmed Afternoons.
Did it
tear you
up
and spit you out?
- by purple_artemis00 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/27/2009 |
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- Title: Audrey
- Artist: purple_artemis00
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Description:
A short poem about the nature of celebrity.
Comments and critiques are hugely appreciated and if you comment (more than 25 words) I will critique your stuff!
Thanks so much - Date: 02/27/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xXxBleeding4UxXx - 05/19/2009
- Great poem. good descriptions and an interesting way to format it. very nice. good visual imagery. again, really good poem. (couldn't get 25 words >.< sorry)
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- Dear Shannon - 03/02/2009
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I loved this here poem, Audrey; the way you formatted it, your use of grammar, your description of her and the things that surround her, and just the idea itself. I loved it. ^^
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