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1. an ocean from a strange yet
wonderous dimention pouring
onto the heads of all.
2. a spark that tells us we still are
little children splashing in the puddles
3. a way of the world to help us
understand that everyone has troubles
4. a reminder that without some gloom
and darkness, there is no sunny sky
5. a good excuse to curl up in a blanket,
sipping coffee and reading a good book
6. a way to remind us we are all raindrops
in the huge ocean of life
7. tears of joy washing away the hatred
and bringing spring to fill in every gap
- by GoldenEnlightenment |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: 7 things about the rain
- Artist: GoldenEnlightenment
- Description: this is just something i came up with in the middle of literature class one day and decided to turn it in for extra credit. to keep it short the teacher decided to read it outloud a few times and comment in front of everyone on how it was one of the best pieces she's seen done by a student. i don't see how it's that good, if you could comment i'de really like advice.
- Date: 02/24/2009
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