Welcome

• Artist: Spidrei
• Description: I was listening to Alice Cooper's Welcome to my nightmare and this is what popped into my head LMAO
• Date: 02/24/2009
• Tags: welcome

Welcome to my nightmares,
where I am no longer in control
where no one is prepared
for what is to come.

Welcome to my dreams,
where the music still plays
where nothing is as it seems
and where my tears still fall
anywhere they please.

Welcome to my life,
where you can hear the screams
and the gleam from the knife
that still hurts me.

Welcome to my death,
which has just begun
where I no longer take a breath
and which that can not be undone.

Comments

[hari saun]

i like it its really good. ots like 1 of the songs i wrote.

[YOMINKO]

fairly unique! check out one of my poems!

[Spidrei]

Thank you

[Hauteng]

I haven't listened to the song effort, but nice anaphora. I only wish you had kept up the repetitions of "where" in three and four... "and the gleam" and "which" in the last two stanzas kind of threw me off.

But it's nice. :3 Kind of catchy.