Being

• Artist: eman_J
• Description: so far i think this is my best poem...sorry if its a bit religious but its one that i think its good enough to be religious.
• Date: 02/23/2009
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Being

God did not say
"i am who will"
he did not say
"i am who can" or
"i am who might"
rather, god said
"i am who am"
so let us be like god
and not say
"I will do better"
"i can be stronger" or
"i might be wiser"
but be as we are
and let us say
I am one
who is loving
who is peaceful
who is thankfull
for the fact
that i"m
who i am.

Comments

[idevoursouls27]

Really good. I like the bravery for publicly showing your religion.

[XxGory GordyxX]

I like that...i respect that so much...

[kiwijian_01]

wow...das soo tru man...awsum

[King of Trash]

If it's good, it's good. And belief is very poetic.
5/5 sir, for your belief.