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People don't care if I'm alive
So why don't i just go on ahead and die
Keep slitting my wrist
And think about suicide
Listening to everyone lies
As these things go on
Its inside banging my head
Coming out of my eyes
With blood dripping down my face
[On this lonely night]
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- Artist: kuyniG
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Description:
I wrote this last year in like November :shock:
Lol i had the description and were the poem go mix up
sorry XD
- Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: untitled
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Comments (3 Comments)
- JohnLeprechaun - 11/21/2009
- No offense, but there are about 100 million poems just like this, and some of the others don't have grammatical errors. An badly made, unoriginal poem just doesn't really interest me.
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- Controlled Vampiress13 - 02/22/2009
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I love your poemthough you got the desrciption and where you put the poem mixed up,lol. Anyways I can sorta relate to it a bit (not the bleeding through the eyes part anyways) I really like it keep on writing
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- kittykatdemon56565 - 02/21/2009
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the description is what tells about the poem, not where you put the poem.
The poems good though. - Report As Spam
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