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i told you i love you
your friends tell you what to do
you tell me the oposite
and made me feel blue
i told you how i feel
and your freends laughed at my face
and in my heart was
a huge empty space
i asked you to be mine
and they roll your eyes
and you say in a painful tone
"Yours the one i dispise"
then the very next day you took my hand
and said "i love you and will you be mine"
i smiled and nodded and when i was able to speak
said "you will always be my valentine"
and from that momment on
he loved me so
and i love him with my whole heat
and that i can show
he dosent listen to them
as they tell him to leave me
he listens to his heart
and now he can see
- by Little Miss Zy |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/20/2009 |
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- Title: i told you i love you
- Artist: Little Miss Zy
- Description: a weird poem i wrote with now meaning. not my best work. tell me wat u think.
- Date: 02/20/2009
- Tags: told love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- pi3pooki3 - 05/15/2009
- where did the idea come from? I love it
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- Krabneckz - 02/21/2009
- reallly nice *thumbs up* teehee
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- sugarsweetooth - 02/20/2009
- this is soo good ive made one called my heart skips a beat but i must idmit this seems so much better! ^-^
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