The Hole in Me

• Artist: Twiztid Lette4Lyfe
• Description: yea i was really depressed haha
• Date: 02/18/2009
• Tags: heart hole emotions

There's a hole in my heart
not a very big one...
but enough
When I am with someone who cares
the emotion spreads to me
and fills me with joy
with love
and with peace
making me feel
like a whole person again
For awhile,
my heart overflows with the passion for living
that the encounter has created...
but then
gradually
the emotion drains away
trickling down
slowly but steadily
through the hole
drip...
drip...
drip...
leaving me
empty
once
more...

Comments

[sleepless012]

nice

[XxsCr3mOcHiKxX]

Amazing!!! I really love the way the poem is aligned, too. It really reminds me of those tough times where I felt like this too. Again, Amazing!!!!! 5 stars!!!

[shadow_kaija]

It is so amazing how you can capture feelings such as this. I love this poem, it is exactly how i feel sometimes. Thank you for sharing 5/5

[Matoe Style]

Brill :O !