- Our love as pleasent as a rose blooming in the beging of summer. Our love was so pleasent that everyone admired us as a couple now we are just strangers in the lonly world . O ur love was as delightful as the sweet taste of the newly fresh honey that was just opened! ! ! ! ! Our love is now nothing but a middle winter blizzared!!!!! Y ou try and tell me that you love me so much that we will work everything out. But i hurts me to say that it is over between us for good good bye a sweet and adoreble love we once shared together! question
- Title: our winter love
- Artist: lilhal
- Description: winter love
- Date: 02/15/2009
- Tags: winter love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- jsky_high - 07/04/2009
- pls check your spellings
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- Domovoi Drearid - 02/25/2009
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Spelling + grammar please.
If you don't understand correct spelling and grammar, I suggest using Microsoft Word. - Report As Spam
- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 02/21/2009
- Quite terrible.
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- Shining Soul Forever - 02/21/2009
- of newley fresh honey? newley fresh? come on! your better than that. Newly meens freshj and fresh means new. Same meaning, so u practicaly said fresh fresh honey, or new new honey in that line.
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