The Exsistence

• Artist: enragedsmallfry
• Description: I wrote this one night while i was waiting for the girl i have a crush on to call. :heart:
  
  
  please comment on anything i can change, and of course if u want more tell me ^( -_-)> ty ty very much
• Date: 02/08/2009
• Tags: exsistence

Alone in the morning sun, I turn towards a gentle voice.

In the dazzling sunlight you casually smile, and open up the window that is my heart.

The existence that changes me and the world is standing right in front of my eyes.

And it’s you.

Comments

[Frozen Chrysalis]

Simple, short, and to the point. I like it, although it leaves me wondering what is so important about this person whose smiling.

[Reddemonspy]

Sweet yet Simple smile I really like it ^__^ I can totally picture this in a painting or something smile

I do want moar XD keeps it up! XD 5/5