Davy Jones is the sea

• Artist: Renata Of the Volturi
• Description: This is my second poem. It's dedicated to the Pirates of the Caribbean.
  Its not my best. But leave your comments and tell me if i did good or what.
  It might not make sense though.. Enjoy!
• Date: 02/06/2009
• Tags: davy jones

Davy Jones is the sea....
He can't Let his voice be heard...
For he can only step on land once every 10 years...
Don't question him or he will send you to the locker...
They've come for him...
But they won't find him..
Because he IS the sea...

Comments

[Starlight_Miss]

I'm sorry but...I didn't really like it. It's too short, it uses copied ideas. But hey! At least you wrote it and it's actually a poem. I can't believe how many I've seen that were copied or not even poetry. 2/5