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With love it starts,
And it will end.
I go left to right,
Then back again.
The sky is there,
Surrounded by the sun.
I feel a great hope,
But then the water comes….
I cry silent tears of pain,
While I sit on this train,
That’s leaving behind the home I know.
Leaving behind the love that’s grown..
I loved you for so many years,
Why, oh why, do you make me cry these tears?
You stole my heart, and broke it to pieces,
Leaving me to pick up the shattered bits and pieces.
I love you still,
And I’m afraid that I always will…
With love it starts,
And it will end….
I go left to right, then back again…
The sky is there, surrounded by the sun...
I feel a great hope, but then the water comes…..
- by xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/04/2009 |
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- Title: With Love it Starts...
- Artist: xXDark_Vampire_LoverXx
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Description:
Okay, so this actually started out as just the first 8 lines, and then I added more a few weeks afterwards. My boyfriend won't talk to me, and I have reason to believe he is cheating on me. I don't care about ratings, or comments, so long as they're fair, and the comments are your HONEST opinion.
Thank you
~Meg~ - Date: 02/04/2009
- Tags: love sadness heart
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Abbygail0810 - 03/21/2009
- Beautiful poem x3
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- Warlock5 - 02/06/2009
- this really hits me where it counts...i guess
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- 290DarkStars - 02/05/2009
- wow... you pwoned me in poetry! Look at that! Thats ART! 5/5 my friend.... Comment on my crap and ill cment on your art mrgreen
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- II-Lady_Kiara_Sungato-II - 02/05/2009
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wow sis....ur better than me!!!! 1,000,000,000/5 ^^ loved it
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- Captain zerghunter - 02/04/2009
- I believe its very good. you get a feel of the pains that love can bring.
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- 5_Demonic Angel_5 - 02/04/2009
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words from the heart, its really good =]
and just wait it out see how it turns out - Report As Spam
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