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• Artist: I Burnt Your Poptarts v4
• Description: I wrote this poem inside my story called Hope (part 2)...i hope u like it! ^^
• Date: 02/03/2009
• Tags: changes

Flowers bloom and children grow
But I wonder if I grow too?
Do I grow with all this pain inside of me, slowly ripping me up into pieces
Or does it eventually go away?
Cars speed by and I cry silently as they go
Do they notice me?
Do they care about me?
Or are they mocking me and laughing at me?
Would they understand if I told them?
Or if they became homeless also?
Days pass by and nothing changes
I wonder if He does this on purpose

Comments

[_hip op princess_]

not horrible its AWESOME! 5/5 stars!

[I Burnt Your Poptarts v4]

>.> <.< >.<

[tennyan]

this was a pretty good poem, i understand completely how hard it is to truely express your self, but keep up the work and you will be a very good poet one day. XD

[Zurah]

Ehh. A few nice lines, overall a drudge.

[I Burnt Your Poptarts v4]

mhm! He is aka god...=)

[carosene]

Interesting take on an overdone subject (though I understand it's hard to be original when you're trying to express your real feelings. ^-^;; ) some nice imagery... I wish you would come back more to the growing with pain, suject, that's the thought provoking part. 3nodding Is "He" a reference to God? Keep writing!