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Everytime I turn around
Everytime I close my eyes
Everyones face I look upon
Or just the dreams I try to hide
Everytime I think im through
Everytime I think I'm over you
You pop right back into my mind
And destory my life one more time
- by Fallen Dark Angel18 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/02/2009 |
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- Title: You......
- Artist: Fallen Dark Angel18
- Description: A break up poem.
- Date: 02/02/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- II-Milly-II - 05/18/2009
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tis poem is beautiful i even rote it down it's so good smile
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- Zurah - 02/04/2009
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I'd consider your grammar carefully. The lack of a cohesive direction in the first stanza irks me.
Otherwise, tolerable. - Report As Spam
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