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Red, blue, white, black, yellow
A rose given from a certain fellow
Blue, yellow, black, white, red
A token of love, nothing said
Black, red, yellow, white, blue
What's a girl to do?
Yellow, blue, red, black, white
How could something be as luminescent as the light?
White, red, blue, yellow, black
It's only a rose. What could it lack?
So many colors and only one scent
The color fades and one wonders where the time went
- Title: Roses, a token of love
- Artist: ADSOC
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- Date: 02/02/2009
- Tags: roses token love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Starlight_Miss - 08/22/2009
- Awesome poem! Creative! 5/5! Please rate back
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- NakedJack - 02/07/2009
- Well, it should read,"How could something be as luminescent as light". "The" is used to refer to something specific. This is really a really good poem. I'm going to favorite it.
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- Kibroth - 02/02/2009
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Very creative concept.
I actually like the wording as it is. Please don't change it. 5/5
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- ADSOC - 02/02/2009
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op it should read "How could something be as luminescent like the light?
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