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This blade so cold,
It feels so nice.
I feel so bold,
This has no price.
I shall not cry,
Or shed a tear.
I hope to die,
Owning up to fear.
As I draw in,
My breath, my last.
This is my death,
You are my past.
Comments (6 Comments)
- Kasuma56 - 04/06/2010
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Noticeable error. Sorry for making it. Dx
Needless to say, It has been corrected. =3 - Report As Spam
- BunnXiLove - 07/25/2009
- nice..not great but really nice ^_^ I think there are only two errors but nothing that will ruin it ^_^
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- IRIDESCENT PIGLET - 02/02/2009
- Nice
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- Xx-Demon _Nose-xX - 02/01/2009
- nice xD
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- Xx-Forgotten Mist-xX - 01/30/2009
- i find it relistic yet not it intreags me and caches my eye and it also is very discriptive i like it
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- xJeriROCKSx - 01/29/2009
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wow! the wording is awesome!!!
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