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Somewhere in the valley grows
A sweet red thing I call a rose
Somewhere I know a garden grows
Deep in mystical blue water rows
Somewhere Daises bloom in lines of gold
In the meadow a story told
Somewhere pansies spout where
on the river they share
Somewhere I picked black eyed susans
because i love my life
Where I grow they grow
A confusing but refreshing poem just fake
things made up to persaude the reader
- Title: Roses or pedals
- Artist: G0_GR33N
- Description: A cute poem of flowers
- Date: 01/27/2009
- Tags: rubyred
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Comments (4 Comments)
- h00drat64 - 10/12/2009
- The rhyme seems forced. Last line wasn't that great, more description would be nice. Not asking you to write an essay, but it was just 'eh' for me. 2/5
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 04/21/2009
- Much better.^ ^But you didn't have to change it on my account, love. It was a comment...
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 04/17/2009
- 'A red rosey thing I call a rose.' That didn't impress me at all.. But brava. 4/5
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