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When I see u I think…
Did I do this, did I cause u this pain
I think that maybe I can make it right
I told u how I feel,
U cased me like a reel
I pulled away,
And I cried all day
My love, my darling…
I know this hasn’t been easy for u…
Neither for me…but think positive
For all I think of is u
I can’t sleep
Can’t eat
Can’t watch anything
Can’t hear anything, with out seeing u
Hearing u
Picturing u
plz give me a chance
that is all i ask.
- by mathias_is_me |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/26/2009 |
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- Title: Sara...plz
- Artist: mathias_is_me
- Description: I wrote this bc i asked my best friend out and she basically rejected me!
- Date: 01/26/2009
- Tags: saraplz
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Comments (3 Comments)
- XxXCriss-Angel-Fan-1XxX - 01/26/2009
- AWSOME 5/5
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- Drizzt104 - 01/26/2009
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It's great, but you didn't maintain a specific flow or form, it changed rythem and beat and didn't have any thyme scheme. It's nice you published it and all but I'm here to judge. Anybody who has a problem with what I said please pm complaints to me.
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- Chrimson Butterfly - 01/26/2009
- at least you're BRAVE enough to say somtin' me on the other hand I suck. THE END 5/5
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