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When he speaks
You listen
Where he looks
So do you
When he is near
Your universe is so bright
It's on fire
A blanket smothers the flames in his absence
Your soul cries when he leaves
And rejoices when he returns
I love you!
I love you!
It shouts
But you are too overwhelmed with tears of happiness
To voice these words
Thank goodness
The eyes are the window to the soul
- Title: windows and eyes
- Artist: Mr Thelma
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Description:
yeahh this is pretty lame but i was bored and decided to submit.
tell me what you think.
(i think it is wierddd)
but i wanna know what YOU think.
:)
(constructive criticism please) - Date: 01/25/2009
- Tags: windows eyes
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Comments (1 Comments)
- OMG You Killed Kenny1596 - 02/01/2009
- good! awesome, great, etc! I love your poem! 5/5
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