Our Song

• Artist: Karkrash Moondog
• Description: Uhmm. What's to say?
  I love this boy, and I wrote this when I was thinkin' about him. =)
  I tried to make it a bit repetitive, but I think it may be too repetitive now. xP
  Anyways, tell me what you think, please. =]
• Date: 01/23/2009
• Tags: song

Just maybe once
We could sit together
Sing a song with no words
Hearts beat in tune
With those love-filled eyes
Sit there and sing a song with no words
'Cause they'll never be enough
Head apon your chest
Thump thump thump
The beat of our song
That has no words
Lips press together
Melting; in the heat of the moment
Eyes closed, hands together
Hope that our song will go on forever
Move me to tears
Our song with no words
I'm so in love with you
But words are never enough for you
Hearts beat in tune, hands together
Gaze into your love-filled eyes
You were my song all along

Comments

[2xXNeOnSkiiTTLEZ2Xx]

I really like it. I see what your trying to say! 5/5

[619 Agent]

Yeah I think that the words don't feel real enough. Its good though, you can tell it expresses love. I like it, just fix it up a little.

[bear of the black cross]

thats how i feel about someone close to me

[x-Azn N3rd]

Its VERY nice,but i think you need 2 work on your words making them more..like real....Anyways..Its Very nice!!