I Wish To Be a Whisper

• Artist: Edward Trivusky IV
• Description: I like poetry. I don't care what you say, I think its good. <3
• Date: 01/20/2009
• Tags: wish whisper

I wish to be a whisper,
swimming softly on your tongue.
I wish to be your maiden,
skin sparkling in the sun.
I'll strive to be a word,
spoken softly just for fun.

I long to see you turn,
and look into my eyes.
I long and I yearn,
from sunset until sunrise.

I am not a whisper,
not as soft as a kiss.
I'm no fair maiden,
and I cannot promise bliss.

I tell you though,
I give you my word.
I will be a whisper,
spoken sweetly in a sonnet.

I wish to be a whisper,
so I can whisper in your ear,
a sweet, simple "I love you."
A small little whisper,
for only you to hear.

Comments

[lil_shadow92]

this is really good! i love how it flows. the imagery is also very nice.

[uzimakichick]

very nice i like how u tied it all together at the end, and thw words are put together beautifully, i like poems that i can picture it in my head and feel what the writer is trying to portray. very well done

[RisexWithxthexDead]

aw cute =]