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All my life i let you walk all over me
Not speaking a word about it
Keeping hushed until no one is around
Screaming in pain as blood pools onto the counter
My wrist in shreds
What would you do if you saw this?
Would you try to save me?
Would you ask me why?
Or would you keep walking over me like nothings wrong
Relieving my pain through a soft touch by the blade
Can i speak out or would you say that im just a wannabe
Or will you walk over me
Not this time
No not this time.
You have always been wrong always thinking highly of yourself
Get off your damn pedestal
And welcome to the real Life
- by XxNot Your_Average GirlxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/15/2009 |
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- Title: Real Life
- Artist: XxNot Your_Average GirlxX
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comment and rate please
i fixed it so rate it - Date: 01/15/2009
- Tags: life
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Comments (2 Comments)
- XxNot Your_Average GirlxX - 01/18/2009
- It was my bad i was writing as fast as possible. i felt emotion but you are right. thanks for your imput
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- Kuro Fukai - 01/18/2009
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hmmm...
There's some questionable capitalization here and there...
some that would be questioned, because I don't even see it being used as an effect...
I've also seen this subject in poetry many a time...
overall, i'ma call it typical...
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