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The Town
By Terry Busby
AKA MrB
As I walked into that dreadful town,
With walls of ash and cobbled ground,
I smiled as I looked around
Because it was so beautiful.
Such splendor! Far beyond adore!
Ne’re had I seen before!
The rapture! Structure! Pure amor!
Because it was so beautiful.
I sat upon a rounded stone
As I beheld the fruits once sown
By people that are now unknown.
Because it was so beautiful.
I looked up to the blackened sky
And thought “Alas, he wasn’t shy,
For now not even a pleasured cry.”
Because it was so beautiful.
The strongest ones to field will go
But only death from every foe.
I figured that this must be so.
Because it was so beautiful.
But from this town I must depart.
I leave it with a heavy heart.
I’ll never forget that work of art.
Because it was so beautiful.
- Title: The Town of Beauty
- Artist: necrofae
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Description:
Another work of the great MrBarthalamul ( or Mr.B )
xD Well, He is not great yet, But if you all give him enough encouragment, he could be!
You see, Im trying to get him to Publish one of his poems, Hes a friend of mine, And as a friend who is very tough-hearted, I think he can make it. ;D
All critique is <3'd - Date: 01/13/2009
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Comments (1 Comments)
- cAndy_pAin - 01/15/2009
- I have to agree with you, make him publish one of his poems.
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