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Last leaves of autumn...
Falling.
The coldness comforts you.
Sit alone now, and watch
As others walk past.
The sundown from that hill
Black birds flying by...
The last memory
Of a beautiful day.
The warm hand interrupts
Winter's embrace...
You smile because
It will never exist...
The cold will be bitter,
The night will sting.
And there will never be
The most important thing...
Only fragments of shadows
And scents that will linger
In order to haunt you
And watch you shed tears.
Once again in the soft black clouds,
As together you are one
And all at once you are
All but pitiful.
Leaves, wave goodbye as you go.
And I'll wave too
Please, just for a moment...
I wish my passing
Could be as beautiful as yours.
- Title: Last Leaves of Autumn
- Artist: Farrelei
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Description:
This began as an experiment. I was actually in quite a rage at the time of writing this and could not sort out my thoughts.
I guess this was a kind of sorting out of my thoughts, then.
It didn't look so good at the time, but it seems better when I look at it now...
I hope you enjoyed it. - Date: 01/04/2009
- Tags: last leaves autumn
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Comments (2 Comments)
- whitejade13 - 01/10/2009
- Oh this is beautiful. A very nicely written poem indeed. I di enjoy it. very good. 5/5
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- Farrelei - 01/10/2009
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I would appreciate comments as I like to hear feedback.
Criticism welcome, thank you. - Report As Spam