a tear amongst my eye

• Artist: Ahayshay
• Description: this poem is about how i am inside.
  i am a person.
  whoes wishes never really come true.
  i wish to fly.
  but in sted i cry.
  knowing it wont come true.
  i hope you like the poem you will read very soon.
• Date: 01/02/2009
• Tags: tear amongst

Amongst the wind..

into witch i fly..

my feather drops from the sky..

a child sits within the snow.

a tear drop apeering from her eye.

so sad she looks.

so sad she is.






that's who i have become to night.

Comments

[Marionette_Mentation]

Hmmm... i like it but it's more of a picture and i get a twindle of emotion and sorrow but i feel like it was cut off short...plz comment back ^.^

[Lafka]

Wow...Gave Me Chills...Great Work

[KissaKurusuki]

wow! ok now i think you are like an famouse poem writer but it is so sad how you feel every day lol so smile! lol

[-Helloxtherexx]

i like ur poems Ahayshay ^^ 5/5